Book writing help need

[ddoking007]

ok so I lost a bet I made on youtube last week now I have to write a book about something.... (you will know more about the book when you get a link from me. via PM or skype.)

This is a X rated book not meant for kids. Mature adults are wanted to help edit, and even add sections to help better describe a scene or even a area.

The book is not a human based book, it features anthropod characters, mixed raced characters, gods and goddesses, and mythical creatures engaging is intimate acts.

if you think you can help please send me a PM or reply to the thread and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

thanks for the help,
Self proclaimed Lord of the VOID
DDOKing007

P.S- If you would like to see the book after it is done I will update this thread OP with a Direct link to the page where you can download the Book.
P.S.S- you will be mentioned in the book aswell

[RobertX]

Help wanted, eh?

Tell us what skills are required for our assistance.

[ddoking007]

Help wanted, eh?

Tell us what skills are required for our assistance.

wrong:
the light was blue

Right:
The light shined with a blueish hue almost as if it was trying to find a way to fill the room with this beautiful sapphire hue.

something like that is what i'm looking for. I can get most of it but every now and again I get stuck trying to describe something to add a whole image in the readers mind.

normally I just use game short hand when i type and that won't cut it for a book i'm currently in chapter 3 of this book and as i type this there is over 4k words in.

I also need someone that can help smooth out the pace-ing my prologue can show how bad I am at pacing.

But I'm tend to Type in sections were i will have a paragraph focus on one thing then as we switch from one focus....
To another I'll start another paragraph like so.

you know what fuck it i'm linking the prologue .....

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Sekv...sp=sharing

there the link that's all you getting until I Finish this book

be forewarned the pacing is uneven and also it give a lot sad emotions that may not continue throughout the rest of the book

Update: been stuck trying to describe something in chapter 3 of this book for 2 days now so i'm a bit grumpy not to mention i've been up 24 hours trying to figure out how to describe it.
I seriously need people that know how to describe a scene that has a pattern or other complex object in it that can edit and add to the document as I write the doc updated almost instantly...
going to go crash need some sleep hope this writers block passes soon I can get a lot of sections typed without having to describe what something looks like that isn't a inanimate object.... HELP